For this
activity, I chose my poem Wolf Boy; I noticed that it was too long so I applied
some of the steps to make it shorter and better. I changed the shape and
structure and worked a little more on imagery. I kept most of the language but I
changed a lot of it so that it would flow better. The final product was better
than the first one, and I liked that this Revision Inventory helped me make it
better.
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